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shanachie_quill ([personal profile] shanachie_quill) wrote2011-02-22 12:09 pm

FIC Renegade

Title: Renegade
Characters: Danny Williams, Matt Williams, Grace Williams, the mother of the Williams’ kids, mentions of other Williams’ relatives
Fandom: Hawaii Five-O AU
Series: Honolulu 96731 'verse
Summary: Danny deals with some changes in a semi-mature way.
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers Prequel to Together Can Never Be Close Enough
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: No one recognizable belongs to me. “Renegade” by Styxx also does not belong to me.
Author's Note: So this is not on my list of things to write today. Clearly I should not let my mind wander while I’m cleaning and listening to my mp3 player…but I don’t think anyone is going to argue with finding out how/why Danny ended up in Hawaii.


Danny set his feet on the ground, switching his Kawasaki off as he studied his dejected brother who was sitting on the front steps. Matt was normally the more upbeat of the Williams’ brothers so the sight of him with his head propped up on his hands, staring glumly at the sidewalk was a worrisome view. He hadn’t even looked up at the sound of the bike which was a clear clue that Danny had returned.

Walking up to the younger boy, Danny kicked his sneakered feet gently. “Who ate your dough, bro?” he asked.

“Where ya been, Danny?” he asked, jerking his head up. “Ma’s been calling you!”

Danny dug his phone out of his pocket, swearing when he saw six missed calls. “Shit. Gracie’s okay, right?”

“Gracie’s fine,” Matt assured him. “But Ma’s on the warpath. She’s pissed as hell that you didn’t answer.”

Jerking a thumb at the bike, Danny reminded him, “I can’t hear it when I’m riding. I wasn’t doing anything, just making sure the seals held on the tweaks I made…and I took her out on the…”

“DANIEL WILLIAMS!”

Both boys winced at the yell from inside the house. “You better go talk to Ma,” Matt said.

Danny’s lips quirked up in a slight grin before he disappeared into the house. “Hey, it wasn’t the full name treatment. I can’t be in too much trouble.”

As soon as he stepped through the doorway, a heat-seeking missile hit him around the legs. Luckily he’d been expecting it and he didn’t do more than back up a step. Picking his little sister up, he tossed her over one shoulder and continued into the house to the accompaniment of her giggles. Entering the living room, he stopped at the sight of his mother, arms crossed and glaring at him. “Where. Have. You. Been?” she demanded.

He let Grace slide to the ground. “Monkey, go play in your room, okay? I need to talk with Mommy,” he told her. Once she ran off, he turned to face their mother. “I went for a ride. I’ve been working on the bike and I went for a test ride. I’m sorry I didn’t hear the phone, but it was in my pocket.”

“I got a call from the school.”

Danny sighed. “That wasn’t my fault. Durgan was picking on Matt and swung at him. I just stepped between them.”

“But fighting. Danny, we’ve talked about this,” she said with a sigh.

“So you’d rather I let him beat the crap out of Matt?” he demanded. “I didn’t hit him! I stepped between them and I backed off as soon as he stopped trying to get to Matt. That’s it!”

“Then I guess it’s just as well I got the news I did today.”

“What news?” Danny shrugged off his leather jacket, tossing it onto the couch. “I’ll take it into my room, Ma,” he said when he saw her wince. “What news did you get?”

“Greg called from work,” she said. “He got a transfer. We’ll be moving before the new school year starts. You three can finish out this year, but we’ll pack up and move before the summer ends. I know it’s your senior year so if you want to stay, I’ll make arrangements with your aunt Margie. But Matt and Grace will be going with us.”

“Where?” Danny cleared his throat. “Where did Greg get transferred to?” He’d learned to tolerate his step-father. The man was good to Grace, took Matt to ballgames, and was actually civil to him, but he would never replace their father. Grace didn’t remember their father at all, but used to ask Danny for stories about him. Now she barely talked about him at all. Danny didn’t blame her, she’d been barely four when he’d been killed, but it still hurt.

“Hawaii. Honolulu to be exact,” his mother answered.

For a moment, Danny just stood in their living room. Greg hadn’t pressured them to move after he’d married his mother. He’d calmly moved into the house, arranged himself around the home they’d already built, but now. Now he wanted to move Danny’s family almost six thousand miles away. And he was willing to let them leave Danny behind. “I’m not letting you take Grace. Or Matt. Away from me,” he told her.

“They aren’t your children, Danny,” she reminded him.

“No,” he told her. “But I promised Dad I’d look out for them.”

“Fine. But you’ll stay out of trouble once we get there.”

Danny sighed again, picking up his jacket from where he’d thrown it. It wasn’t like he went looking for trouble. It just seemed to find him.

[identity profile] irishjeeper.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Very interesting ... *twirls*

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Really? That's it? Nothing more?

[identity profile] irishjeeper.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ... the bouncing didn't come through ...

LOL! Yes yes darling it goes without saying that I love this. A LOT!

Poor Danny being ripped away from what he knows, because of a step father. But but but he's going to STEVE! even though he doesn't know it yet.

And Gracie's his sister ... interesting. :-P

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL well you wrote twirling not bouncing so no it didn't come through.

Glad you love it.

Yup. Well, he had a choice. He could have stayed, but he couldn't leave Gracie and Matt. And yes, he will meet Steve. Not sure Danny sees that as a good thing.

Yes, Gracie's his sister. :-) I couldn't have that angel not be a part of his life...or the product of a one night stand.

[identity profile] irishjeeper.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Yes, twirling is very very good. Better than bouncing perhaps!

Yes, Gracie's his sister. :-) I couldn't have that angel not be a part of his life...or the product of a one night stand.

One of the many reasons I adore and love you dearly!

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
To each her own then.

:-) Well I'm glad to hear that. And considering Danny most assuredly swings one way and one way only...it would be hard for him to be Gracie's father.

[identity profile] whogeek.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice. Like seeing why they ended up in Hawaii. And Danny being protective older brother to Matt. :D And trouble finds Danny in Hawaii, in the form of one Steve McGarrett. XD

Also, spelling quibbles: I think you mean Danny "backs up a step" rather than a "set" when Grace tackle-hugs him, and "we've" talked, not "we're" from Ms. Williams. And when Danny is thinking about his step-father, "and was actually civil to him" you're missing the was there. :D

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course he's a protective older brother. Yeah...it needed to be done. And then the stupid song came on...and that was all she wrote.

LOL I know, right? It's not like Danny goes looking for trouble. It just kinda finds him.

Thank you, bebe. See what happens when I try to write without you? My damn brain gets ahead of my fingers and I have all kinds of issues!

[identity profile] whogeek.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course! We saw that in the ep last night.

He really doesn't. But then he meets Steve, and Steve is even more of a trouble-magnet than Danny.

ROFL!! Aren't you so glad I'm willing to come in and do a reverse-beta for you? And I know the feeling: my brain sometimes goes too fast for even my brain to keep up with it! :D

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes and I can only imagine it would be even worse if this were the situation.

Oh lordy. Imagine the trouble these two will get into. And then...Danny won't leave Hawaii because of Grace :-)

Yes! I am very glad for that. Cuz you were awesome!

God or I get distracted...because I get text messages or what have you.

[identity profile] samjohnsson.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/

Now I really need to go watch 1x18

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
ROTFL this? Has nothing to do with 118.

Me wanting to throw things? That has a LOT to do with 118.

[identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this glimpse into Danny's family and life in Jersey.

And he was willing to let them leave Danny behind. “I’m not letting you take Grace. Or Matt. Away from me,” he told her.

“They aren’t your children, Danny,” she reminded him.

“No,” he told her. “But I promised Dad I’d look out for them.”

“Fine. But you’ll stay out of trouble once we get there.”


I love how overprotective Danny is of his younger brother and sister but I don't think his mom wanted to leave him behind when they moved to Hawaii, she was just giving him the choice.

And as a side note, I love the idea of Grace being Danny's baby sister instead of his actual baby--17/18 years old is a bit young to be a good dad, but now I have to wonder how their dad died--was he a cop who died on the job?

Great work on this series :)

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it :-)

Danny is extremely overprotective of his siblings. She was giving him the choice, but she would have left him behind if that would have made him happy.

Danny's 17 here, 18 by the time they get to Hawaii. Yes, it would be a bit young for him to be a good father...unless I de-aged Grace also.

Um....I'm not going to answer that? Because it will come up in a later story. Danny is going to tell Steve.

Great work on this series :)
Thank you.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Very interesting.

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] loki256.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
0.o such a commited brother, when is steve going to TALK to him already!!! (sorry, my highschool days where not dearly this interesting so i may be living a wee bit vicariously here...) love it, favouried, all that!

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
He really is.

Steve has just a few issues. And technically he has talked to him...just not the way everyone wants him to.

Glad you're enjoying it!

[identity profile] mrssnape13.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
So glad we still get Grace in this verse. :) Good back story! Of course we all know what sort of trouble's going to find Danny in Hawaii. ;)

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-25 03:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Grace and Danny are so intertwined in my mind that I just cannot conceive of writing one without the other. So the only question really was what part of his life she was going to play.

LOL yes trouble is going to find him...which is why I wrote the last line the way I did...a little blatant foreshadowing.

[identity profile] weakmoments.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I just love this! I adore overprotective Danny and of course he wouldn't wanna stay behind and lose Matt and Grace. Aww, and it broke my heart a bit knowing that they were willing to leave him behind and thinking he'd stay...whether it was his senior year or not. I guess I automatically go to that place of 'do they really want me around' whenever I read things cause well, you know.

But yay that now we know how he ended up in Hawaii!

Oh, and also? I could totally hear a mother's voice screaming his name!! Yeah...I think though that everyone that has survived being a teen has heard that voice!

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-25 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :-) Yes, Danny is extremely overprotective. No, he wouldn't want to stay behind.

It's not so much that they wanted to leave him behind as they were willing to do it if that was what he wanted them to do. His mom was trying to give him options. She was looking at it's his senior year and he's never lived anywhere else so she didn't think he'd want to leave all his friends. It would have hurt them painfully if he'd decided to stay behind so they were really glad he didn't.

Does that make more sense now?

But yay that now we know how he ended up in Hawaii!
I have to remember my readers aren't psychic and even if I know how events played out...they don't. :-)

Oh, and also? I could totally hear a mother's voice screaming his name!! Yeah...I think though that everyone that has survived being a teen has heard that voice!
Oh absolutely. I hope she didn't come across as a harridan though...because she isn't...just an overwhelmed mother. Who didn't know where her son was...and was a little annoyed with him.

[identity profile] swing-set13.livejournal.com 2011-02-24 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
MOAR!!!!!!!!!

I want to hug Danny - he needs hugs.

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-02-24 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
:-) No more for this one. But yeah.

Steve'll give him hugs. Once he gets his head outta his ass and stops being a dingbat. Until then Danny'll get his hugs from Grace.

[identity profile] alocine-89.livejournal.com 2011-03-06 05:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*strokes moustache*

the clues are beginning to come together!

:D

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-03-06 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL oh really? Well if you email me you can ask me actual questions.

You are just busy right? Nothing else is going on?

[identity profile] maria42.livejournal.com 2011-05-04 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow!! I completely missed this *feels kind of stupid now*

[identity profile] shanachie-quill.livejournal.com 2011-05-04 10:07 pm (UTC)(link)
There are a couple that are prequels to "Together" that were written after it. So don't feel stupid. I

If you click on the honolulu verse tag and scroll down just a bit...there's a Master Post tag that has all of Arc One in the correct order. I haven't added any of Arc Two to it yet...