Find a minute to read it and I like it)) so OT3))) Have a critical view, though)) Parker was a little bit OOC, just too childish, I know it's Parker and we can expect anything but still that moment with climbing was too much, I think) Also Eliot's 'sweetheart' was cute but umm...I don't see that he would call her that not to mention so often) You don't want to kill me, yet?=))) And the last bit is painting stuff. How could they not know about brushes, rollers, etc? I mean it's like just Eliot said "Well you aren’t planning to finger paint, are you?" They may not know about How but some thoughts about that Hardison should have had)) Enough with criticism. I love your fic. Especially the first part, so true, IC. And pretzelzels quote is so sweet)) Love you for this "because Eliot would be all growly and make me do it right. I don’t want to do it right, I just want to paint." It made my day. So simple and yet so good portrayal of characters)))) Thank you!)))
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Have a critical view, though))
Parker was a little bit OOC, just too childish, I know it's Parker and we can expect anything but still that moment with climbing was too much, I think)
Also Eliot's 'sweetheart' was cute but umm...I don't see that he would call her that not to mention so often)
You don't want to kill me, yet?=)))
And the last bit is painting stuff. How could they not know about brushes, rollers, etc? I mean it's like just Eliot said "Well you aren’t planning to finger paint, are you?" They may not know about How but some thoughts about that Hardison should have had))
Enough with criticism. I love your fic. Especially the first part, so true, IC.
And pretzelzels quote is so sweet))
Love you for this "because Eliot would be all growly and make me do it right. I don’t want to do it right, I just want to paint." It made my day. So simple and yet so good portrayal of characters))))
Thank you!)))